Loving is not all about kisses and chocolates, it is about mending a broken heart and setting a caged spirit free.
I was a broken butterflyBattered, shamedMy wings, rippedRendered unable to fly
I was the gloom of the nightMy tears, daily droppedMy heart, weary and wroughtI had been broken by loveOne, whom with no restrictionI gave all my trust
I had been beatenForcefully takenOver, and overTill my life, hovered
In the dead of the night,I had been pushed awayNaked and hungryWounds boilingSalt upon injuryYet, I never made the jury
It was youYou picked me upScared, like a lost catI mewed and scratchedBut you, you always returnedUntil slowly, I learned to trust
My wings, you sewed backMy wounds, you cleanedMy soul, you healedMy tears, you driedLike your spirit,You tended to mine
Slowly, but surelyYou made me wholeIn your eyes,I saw it allThe will to live, you returned to meThe strength to fight, I found inside
In your eyesI saw the truthIn your act, I felt it tooWhen you said you love meI'm sorry I flinchedI have known loveIt wasn't like thisNo, thisIs Alien
Original poetry by @zizy
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Great Poetry I like Poetry and it's also really hard to pick up the broken pieces of heart💔 when it fully shattered bye any other , and Also Great write-up
It's hard to pick up broken pieces when the heart is broken but someone who loves you would be patient until they fix you
The heart is a very precious thing The heart tells us and with the mind we act when we think Your poetry is very powerful
Some broken heart never mend, some mend heart never break, look out for that person that loves you truely and that person that you really love, that shattered heart will be mended
Ah, before commenting, i give salute to all poeters, you are trying.
Love is not about sex, goodies and all but a sacrifice of enduring your two sided imperfections. If you are in love and you can't heal your partner wound then you are in lost not love.
This is perfectly a good one, Zizy.😍😍😍
Great words. Let your love heal each other and make each other whole
Zizy here you go again with another awesome poetic work.
I envy your talent babe, I which I can write like you.
Hurt touching line fully broken 💔 in love but hope someone also with in love ask slowly ..
.trust in love
Yes bro you are right may God bless tou pove is a thing which gives us a lot of feelings
You are right, love is such a thing that if someone is deceived, he will not live again.
You are right .love is not about getting goodies is about putting smile on someone's face.it is about making someone forget his or her worries.
It is about making someone believe in themselves again and let go of fear
All things poetry.
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