Story Of My Survival Is Victorious🍃

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​​​​​Sores on my skin
Smoke in my tears
Cold sentiments as if
The dread of gloomy night
Story of my survival is victorious🍃

Thorn deep in my foot
Bloody steps all along
I still walked my way
With brave heart
Story of my survival is victorious 🍃

Spear piercing hind
Counting on my breath
Believing to live more
Trusting my gut to core
Story of my survival is victorious🍃

Folks cursing my shine
Pouring pitchers of brine
Wounds open canine
Fighting the purpose mine
Story of my survival is victorious🍃
 

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11

Hassan Khan
6d

Very nice poetry 👍😊

Yes you are right in every difficult situation survival is necessary and patience is a word which is very important in every situation. Hopefully the good days come early

18

Anthony Eri
6d

I can relate this poetry to the story of my life in 2020! It was really a victorious year for me despite the downsides and the crises that rocked this year, I survived, I achieved my goals, I emerged victorious. So I sing this beautiful poetry you have composed, a poetry of survival, through blood, gut and pain. But at the end of it all, I don't give credit to myself.... God's grace and mercy, saw me through💪🏼

Amazing poem Esma!

10

Alagbe Adeniyi
6d

Nice poetry you got here...

The story in this context is really Victorious..

11

Minha Khan
6d

Indeed dear,,

It is all about survival  ,,,

many peoples get worst injuries but they survives,they stand to fight with all these situations,,,Yeah..

where there is fall there is rise also...

Nice write up dear @Esma....

this story is victorious...

20

victor vickyrich
6d

Very well written my dear. In life,not everyone is born with a silver spoon and as such most of us learn the hard way which makes us value anything we achieve.

We are all trying to survive,both those that are wealthy and also trying to be wealthy. As long as we keep striving,our survival will be victorious and we shall become triumphant.

We shall become a victor and our success can't be overthroned. No matter what happens, determined and hardwork is vital in whatever we do as we keep striving to achieve our goals...

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