He Could Not Lose Him....!!!!

He just hanged up the call, ran towards the gate and started his bike. He was in a hurry to reach there as fast as he could. He was told that his friend was in emergency and in a critical condition. There was no guarantee if he would survive. 




His mind was flashing back all the memories of the times they had spent together, all the moments they enjoyed together, all the mischief they did together. He could hear his friend's laughter and see the beautiful smile on his face. "How brighter his face glows, lively and vibrant! What if I could hear no more of his laugh and see his smiling face??" Ah, his mind refused to think further as he felt losing his breath, heart sinking down and the world going foggy and blurry. 




Reaching the destination, he jumped off the bike and ran towards emergency ward to have a glance at him but doctors didn't let him in. He begged to let him meet his friend.  One of the doctors came forward to him, consoled him and told him to pray.




He sank down on the floor with wet eyes, praying for his life. He was his most sincere childhood friend who never left him alone even in his hard time. His heart could not bear to lose him.




While he was in his chaotic thoughts and praying. He saw the team of doctors coming out of the emergency. He rushed towards them but before asking the desired question, the sparkling eyes and a light smile on the doctors' face said that all. He glimpsed at them questionigly and one of them nodded leaving his eyes full of tears, pleasure and gratitude.



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Esha G
24 Sep

Good friends are connected with one breath.  Can't even think of living without them.  God forbid

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Hamza Ashraf
24 Sep

Really a beautiful story line and worth reading. I love to read that's why i like imaginary content alot.

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Wakygrace Shammah
24 Sep

Oh my! I was almost feeling sad as well here. The boy was scared and worried for his friend, I really can understand that feeling.

And I am glad that God heard his prayers and saved the life of his friend.

The smile the doctors gave him alone is an assurance that his friend is okay

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Fiha Shah
24 Sep

@Hafsa keep it up Dear

You nailed it 🙂

How Amazingly you sum this writing and the ending of this story is really good and happy ending.

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Okafor precious
24 Sep

This write up is damn heart touching.....

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