Deathnote🎵🎵

Oh you dark soul
I am the death note
Play me when you're fed up
From the untrue love
🎵🎵
I will fill your breath
With the glitter of happiness
You will expire the colours
The colours of truth
The colours of righteousness
You will inspire the chunks of light
You will respire the love infinity
Your soul will be freed of abandon
I will set you free of guilt
The grains of happiness
Will enter your soul
The dust of wrath and grief
Would be washed away
🎵🎵
Oh you dark soul
I am the deathnote
Play me when you are fed up
 From the untrue love


​(poster is created by me)

COMMENT

16

Captain Philips
3d

Are you a Metal Rock Fan? This is a dope lyrics

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Esma Sid
3d

Haha you guessed me right tho😁 i have love for writing such things

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16

Captain Philips
3d

Your words are uniquely awesome, at first glance I would have thought of you as a Lyricist to a rock Band.(chuckles)

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Esma Sid
3d

Hehe thankyou so much for your words Captain😁😁😇☺

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6

Uwem Ekanem
3d

Wow... Wonderful and amazing lines of poetry.. DeathNote, I love the lyrics. Nice one

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20

Esma Sid
3d

Gracias Uwem for always supporting my work. 😇

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Amah Samuel
3d

Hope you didn't share this for sharing sake cos I feel that good lines of musical composition like this should be taken to the center stage where you are expected to sing it and then make yourself known dear. Moreover, this is just a very very good way to start life in the ever interesting world of music🤘👍

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Esma Sid
3d

Thankyou so much Amah i am really glad that you enjoyed reading it.😁😁

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Amah Samuel
3d

I'm every good music composition and construction, you will see repetition of lines, you will see rhyme scheme, you will lyrics and these are exactly all I've seen in this your lovely line of music and therefore do encourage you to do well next time ok. 

More power to your elbow💪💪💪

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Esma Sid
3d

Wow Amah! Your comment made my day. You know praise at hardwork generates energy that fills more strength to do more what already doing .  thankyou

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4

Akhtar Ali
3d

Wow,,...Mashallah 

What a wonderful poetry ...

I think you are write a good poetry so keep it ...

Really very interesting 

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20

Esma Sid
3d

I am so thankful to you for your praise to my work.

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