**THE CROWN OF THORN**
Am back to the starting point
With much pain and scars
The thorn of love struck my heart
Thorn piercing through my thick skin.
A pain so severe and long lasting
Struck me so hard like crucifix
Never knew its was a thorn in disguise
Love tale becoming thorns tale.
The pain of betrayal
The pain of bruised trust
The pain of broken pledge and vows
The pain remains a thorn in my vein.
Truly I felt like a king
Wearing a crown and having a queen
Heart and mind so determine that she is true
But the crown was made of thorn.
The love was lost in gain
Business gone down the drain
No more business as usual
Apparel made with lining of thorns.
Still the scars still hurt
Beauty faded like the harmattan cloud
Even the throne seat is full of thorns
Just because love was initially pledged.
The poem portrays a true life story of betrayal of love. It is subjected to criticism and correction.
Originally written by me
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Its quite a sad one. Truly one looses almost everything once he looses his love. But then you must find the strength to keep going on and moving forward buddy
Thanks, thats the way forward
It is very admirable Poem by you. Responsiblity is a thing which is not easy to take.
There is no big deal when you correct but critics is bad
Nice write...indeed a crow of thorn for him
I can't imagine how it feels to be betrayed by your trusted ones...a lot to bear for him
I like your lines..keep writing
The lines you shared are impressive and its all about criticism i like that lines in the poem..
The love was lost in gain.
Business gone down the drain..
Very interesting and mind blowing
All things poetry.
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