ADDICTION




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It's crashing down on me,


Yes; my world is crashing 


I need a saviour; I can't help it anymore




Drown into the waters of its enchantment ,


I'm enslave to an enemy of no substance


That neither feels nor fear




More and more I try to be free


Just to lift my head out of the deep


And breath fresh breadth




But anytime I try, I get submerge 


Over and over Into my destruction


Deeper than I was before




My hands are tied to a path,


I was warned never to ply,


My soul is draining, I'm dying, I need help.




This poem is dedicated to all those struggling with addiction and are genuinely doing everything within their power to be free. I hope you are free finally.




Thanks always


Your humble boy 





COMMENT

9

Queku Cino
08 May

Wow a very intelligent poem.....most people have been locked in addiction. They want to stop but the society keeps critisizing them which is too bad.

16

Uncle Jay
08 May

Onlynif the society knew that helping them to scale through such grip will better sustains it foundation. They might probably not abuse, criticize, discriminate against them.

Thanks for stopping by.

14

Pabon Godfrey
08 May

Thanks uncle. JAY. YOUR POETIC WISDOM, your coinage,  has made my night. Addiction can really be terrible. 

16

Uncle Jay
08 May

I'm honoured sir. Thanks for stopping by 

21

idunique Etim™
08 May

Great poetry work on addiction.

I hope this message sinks into the soul of those struggling with various addictions.

16

Uncle Jay
08 May

Boss....I hope so too. Thanks for stopping by 

6

Busayomi Yusuff
08 May

Nice poem. If you find one around you, let endeavor to show them love and reasons for them to free from their addiction

23

Marianne West
08 May

You described addiction very well. It is such a struggle for those that have gone down that path...

16

Uncle Jay
08 May

Thank you very much...

It a devastating struggle ma, I've seen it first hand.

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