A BRUTAL "NO"

She was waiting for the door to be opened, holding a bouquet of flowers with sparkles of hope in her eyes. Her hands and feet were cold and shaky because, being a girl it was the hardest job for her to take the initiative to let him know her sentiments, passion and sincerity for him.




Her emotions, expectations and feelings were as delicate and fragile as those flowers in her hands. A harsh refusal could destroy and hurt them badly. 




Suddenly the door opens, and the man she wanted to see impatiently, appears. As soon as she presented him the bouquet of her emotions, sentiments along with the flowers, a cold and wicked smile spread across his face. He just took a glimpse on the girl, took the bouquet from her hands, smelled the flowers and the very next moment, threw them all on the ground, crushed them under his feet and shut the door on her face. 




She was just quiet, standing astonished and anxious, seeing the murder and then a funeral of her emotions which were crushed by him brutally. A moment or two in a little shock, she stood up and returned from there.




Although she came back home but a "NO" could be said in other gentle ways not hurting the sentiments and self respect of a person. She had thought not to waste her time for such an emotionless, heartless, ill mannered and rude person. What future brings you would be the best for her indeed.




LIFE GOES ON, WE MEET PEOPLE, GET HURT, RECEIVE REFUSALS BUT IN THE END, WE HAVE TO STAY STRONG, STAND STRONGER AND MOVE ON.





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2

Fatima Khan
23 Oct

Amazing. 

Yeah its 200% true that we met with many things in life which breaks us emotionally and mentally but all we should try to be more stronger than before.

4

Afsar Khan
22 Oct

Much impressive lines. Life must not be really destroyed for such people and must step forward. 

12

Ujala Awan
23 Oct

A very painful emotional story which has a very good lesson. Life goes on we meet people inspired and loved, even hurt by them but we have to realise that life never stopped on someone's rude behaviour and someone's refusal. 

We should stay strong because life can't stop. life needs to move on.  We have to walk through it.

So stay strong. ❣

14

Malik Asad Riaz
23 Oct

When we start expecting too. Much from people then a day comes when they break we can't manage to carry their wight alone. 

12

Akhter Malik
23 Oct

Life is a combination of good or bad experiences. We meet different  types of people in our life. Sometimes we meet such person who reacts against our expectations. I think it is a cime to break someone's heart or play with sentiments.

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